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Homework 3

작성자: 이*민
2025-01-09 198

회원님의 영작문

1. If you feel you are inadequate for the job, get some useful experience. (If / Whether)
2. It is unwise to approach him while he is still angry.
3. The blind man and his dog are inseparable.
4. The invincible mountains protected the tiny village from invaders.
5. The new principal made a bad impression on the students.
6. The early years of a person’s life are the most impressionable.
7. Since the police hinted that the crime is solved, I concluded that they would soon arrest the culprit. (is solved / solved / was solved)
8. The prisoner implored the king to mercy. (to / for)
9. The mayor imposed a curfew until the disturbance was over. (until / unless / if)
10. Retired people can improve their lives by doing volunteer work. (will / can / shall)
11. The reading rooms need better illumination. (need / are needing / have needed)
12. Mirrors give an illusion of more space in a room. (allusion / illusion)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Yumin!!!

I enjoy talking with you!! Keep it up!!!

I do believe that you can improve your skills in English. I recommend that you should focus on our daily lessons son that you can be successful in achieving your goals.

We need to develop all of our skills in studying English but the most important thing is believe in yourself. You can to do it!!!

T. Jeny


1. If you feel you are inadequate for the job, get some useful experience. (If / Whether)
>>correct
2. It is unwise to approach him while he is still angry.
>>correct
3. The blind man and his dog are inseparable.
>>correct
4. The invincible mountains protected the tiny village from invaders.
>>correct
5. The new principal made a bad impression on the students.
>>correct
6. The early years of a person’s life are the most impressionable.
>>correct
7. Since the police hinted that the crime is solved, I concluded that they would soon arrest the culprit. (is solved / solved / was solved)
>>Since the police hinted that the crime was solved, I concluded that they would soon arrest the culprit.
8. The prisoner implored the king to mercy. (to / for)
>>The prisoner implored the king for mercy
9. The mayor imposed a curfew until the disturbance was over. (until / unless / if)
>>correct
10. Retired people can improve their lives by doing volunteer work. (will / can / shall)
>>correct
11. The reading rooms need better illumination. (need / are needing / have needed)
>>correct
12. Mirrors give an illusion of more space in a room. (allusion / illusion)
>>correct
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