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I believe that happiness and economic success are related, but not directly. This is because Bhutan that is a poor country is known to be one of the happiest nations in the world.

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It's Hump Day Ms. Rachel! Wednesday will either make you or break you. You are either on the upward trend or the downward slide to the end of the work week. Give it all you got this Wednesday!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I believe that happiness and economic success are related, but not directly. 
>>>CORRECT~!^^
This is because Bhutan that is a poor country is known to be one of the happiest nations in the world.
>>> This is because Bhutan, a poor country, is known to be one of the happiest nations in the world.
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