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The most special memory of me and my grandparents is that we went on an overseas trip. Because it was my first overseas trip with my grandparents, and it was fun.

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Eric,

Thanks for sharing! 

-Teacher Ash


The most special memory of me and my grandparents is that we went on an overseas trip. 
>> The most special memory for me with my grandparents was when we went on an overseas trip. 

Because it was my first overseas trip with my grandparents, and it was fun.
>>It is a special memory because it is my first overseas trip with my grandparents, and it was fun. 
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