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I have no special itinerary
This trip is a kind of reward for my youngest daughter. She has finished her work in another academy. She was praised a lot for the competency to teach by the director and the students in the academy. I wanted her to relax and relieve the stress. So we stayed at a resort with five swimming pools and nice nature. Near our accommodation, there is a long beach and local market. We swam every day and enjoyed Thai food.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Wow! I can imagine how relaxing your vacation must have been. Sometimes, having no itinerary makes a trip better because you can do things spontaneously. It's also nice that you treated your daughter as a sign of appreciation as well. I think it made her vacation more memorable!
- T. Caitlyn 
I have no special itinerary
>> CORRECT
This trip is a kind of reward for my youngest daughter. 
>> CORRECT
She has finished her work in another academy. 
>> CORRECT
She was praised a lot for the competency to teach by the director and the students in the academy. 
>> She was praised a lot for her competency to teach by the director and the students in the academy.
I wanted her to relax and relieve the stress. 
>> CORRECT
So we stayed at a resort with five swimming pools and nice nature. 
>> CORRECT
Near our accommodation, there is a long beach and local market. 
>> CORRECT
We swam every day and enjoyed Thai food.
>> CORRECT
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