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I think that all people have each attraction! So, I don¡¯t think that some people are ugly.☺️


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-> I can¡¯t interpret this part well. What does it mean?

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Hi, Minju! I agree that people have their own unique, attractive characteristics. We just need to really look into it. 
--Teacher Anji

I think that all people have each attraction! 
OR >> I think that all people have their own attractive characteristics. 
So, I don¡¯t think that some people are ugly.
>> CORRECT

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>> It means someone's true nature or character. 
Example: She loves him for what he is. = She loves him for what his character and nature truly are, without judging or trying to change him.
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