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How did you feel when you first started learning English? Was it easy or hard?

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When I first started learning English, it was easy.
Because I just enjoy to study English, then.

When I was an elementary school student, I wanted to study English and spontaneously enrolled an English academy. And I thank studying English is easy more than studying many different country¡¯s languages. It¡¯s because if I only learned ¡®phonics¡¯, I can read all of the English words. So, I felt English is very interesting language and enjoyed studying it. Additionally, I can also improve confidence about English.

However, when I was a high school student, It¡¯s not funny to study English any more. Because I only have to study it for the college entrance exam. And English is gradually difficult, so I didn¡¯t study hard at that time.

I think ¡®enjoy¡¯ is very important thing to study language. And when I first started learning English, I enjoyed studying it. Therefore, it was EASY for me!

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Hello Yun Bin!

You¡¯ve written such a heartfelt and detailed reflection about your English learning journey! It¡¯s wonderful to hear how much you enjoyed studying English when you first started, it really shows that having fun while learning makes a big difference. Your excitement about phonics and how it helped you feel confident is inspiring. It¡¯s true that when we enjoy what we¡¯re doing, it feels much easier and more rewarding.

I understand how studying English in high school became less enjoyable because of the pressure from exams. That¡¯s a common experience, but it¡¯s great that you¡¯ve recognized the importance of enjoying the process. You¡¯re absolutely right, when we find joy in learning, it becomes easier and more meaningful. Keep up the amazing work, and remember, you¡¯re doing so well now! Keep enjoying the process, and the progress will follow.

~Teacher Cathy

 

When I first started learning English, it was easy.

>>CORRECT

OR>> When I began learning English, it felt easy.

Because I just enjoy to study English, then.

>>Because I just enjoyed studying English back then.

When I was an elementary school student, I wanted to study English and spontaneously enrolled an English academy.

>>When I was an elementary school student, I wanted to study English and spontaneously enrolled in an English academy.

And I thank studying English is easy more than studying many different country¡¯s languages.

>>And I think studying English is easier than studying many different countries' languages.

It¡¯s because if I only learned ¡®phonics¡¯, I can read all of the English words.

>>It¡¯s because if I only learned phonics, I could read all of the English words.

So, I felt English is very interesting language and enjoyed studying it.

>>So, I felt that English is a very interesting language and enjoyed studying it.

Additionally, I can also improve confidence about English.

>>Additionally, I can also improve my confidence in English.

However, when I was a high school student, It¡¯s not funny to study English any more.

>>However, when I was a high school student, studying English was no longer fun.

Because I only have to study it for the college entrance exam.

>>Because I only had to study it for the college entrance exam.

And English is gradually difficult, so I didn¡¯t study hard at that time.

>>And English gradually became more difficult, so I didn¡¯t study hard at that time.

I think ¡®enjoy¡¯ is very important thing to study language.

>>I think enjoying is a very important thing when studying a language.

And when I first started learning English, I enjoyed studying it.

>>CORRECT

OR>>And when I began learning English, I found enjoyment in studying it.

Therefore, it was EASY for me!

>>CORRECT

OR>>As a result, it was effortless for me!

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