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Define what friendship means to you.

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I want to define "Friendship is like a mirror that makes me look at myself,"
When I evaluate the person, I see what his close friends are like.
It's not about whether they have a lot of money or whether they have a high social status, but I look at his friends' personalities and what the standards of value are for looking at the world.
If those standards are different, it is difficult to be close to each other.
I try to fix things when I find something I need to fix in the form of my close friends, and I try to imitate them if there is something I want to resemble.
Eventually, through friendship, we grow in a good direction together.

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Hi David, I just wanted to share how much I appreciate your output today. Friendship really is like a mirror as it helps us see ourselves more clearly and grow. I loved the idea that we¡¯re influenced by the people we surround ourselves with, and how their values and personalities can shape the way we look at the world. It¡¯s amazing how friendships encourage us to improve ourselves and inspire us to aim higher. Your definition of friendship reminded me the beauty of meaningful connections and how they help us grow together. You write beautifully, David. Keep it up!


~ T. Lia

I want to define "Friendship is like a mirror that makes me look at myself."
>> CORRECT


When I evaluate the person, I see what his close friends are like.
>> CORRECT


It's not about whether they have a lot of money or whether they have a high social status, but I look at his friends' personalities and what the standards of value are for looking at the world.
>> CORRECT


If those standards are different, it is difficult to be close to each other.
>> CORRECT


I try to fix things when I find something I need to fix in the form of my close friends, and I try to imitate them if there is something I want to resemble.
>> I try to fix things when I find something I need to improve in the behavior of my close friends, and I try to imitate them if there is something I admire.


Eventually, through friendship, we grow in a good direction together.
>> CORRECT

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