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How can the accident at Jeju Air be related to your course (Aircraft Engineering)?

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Yes, I think it's related to my course. I think Jeju Air's plane has large and small defects. So aircraft engineers have to take care of their planes carefully. But this accident is still investigateing, so we have to wait for result of accident.

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Good morning, Jun!
With the kind of accident that recently happened not only in your country, people are very concerned about their safety when flying. I am really glad that at your young age, you already know your job that will make passengers feel secure when flying.
Have a great day!
T. Aki~

Yes, I think it's related to my course.
>>> CORRECT!

I think Jeju Air's plane has large and small defects.
>>> CORRECT!

So aircraft engineers have to take care of their planes carefully.
>>> CORRECT!

But this accident is still investigateing, so we have to wait for result of accident.
>>> But this accident is still under investigation so we have to wait for the result of the accident.
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