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Which do you prefer among these three to live in : an urban, suburban, or rural area? Why?

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I think I prefer to live in the urban.
Because I have lived in the city since I was born until I lived apart from my parents, so I am familiar with the city culture.
In addition, the city has developed transportation, and there are many convenience facilities such as marts and department stores.
And there are many places where people can enjoy culture, so it's good.
However, I am worried because there are many new crimes such as serious traffic jams and noise between floors.
I don't think it's bad to live in a cleaner suburban than a city, as long as the transportation problem is solved.
However, because there are many rural areas where transportation is not developed, I don't want to live in a lot of inconveniences.

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Hi! 

Thank you for submitting your answer. 
I sincerely appreciate your honesty in sharing your thoughts. 
Oh, the suburb would definitely be nice, but as you mentioned, the issues with transportation and other inconveniences should be fixed first. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

I think I prefer to live in the urban.
>> I think I prefer to live in the urban area. 
Because I have lived in the city since I was born until I lived apart from my parents, so I am familiar with the city culture.
>> I have lived in the city since I was born until I moved away from my parents, so I am familiar with city culture.
In addition, the city has developed transportation, and there are many convenience facilities such as marts and department stores.
>> CORRECT.
And there are many places where people can enjoy culture, so it's good.
>> CORRECT. 
However, I am worried because there are many new crimes such as serious traffic jams and noise between floors.
>> However, I am worried because there are many new crime, serious traffic jams and noise between floors.
I don't think it's bad to live in a cleaner suburban than a city, as long as the transportation problem is solved.
>> I don't think it's bad to live in a cleaner suburb than a city, as long as the transportation problem is solved.
However, because there are many rural areas where transportation is not developed, I don't want to live in a lot of inconveniences.
>> CORRECT. 
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