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December is almost over. What three adjectives best describe this month?

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I would like to express my December using these three words : Unusual, silent, and warm
Since, South Korea has faced on the political conflict, my December was unusual with the chaotic circumstances built. Fortunately, my personal time for this December was silent enough to enjoy the thing I really want to do such as jamming with my busking group members. Lastly, I felt warmer in my room than before I bought small heater. Hope this winter passes with warmer room temperature.

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Good evening, Matthew!

Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
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I would like to express my December using these three words : Unusual, silent, and warm
>>> I would like to express my December using these three words: unusual, silent, and warm.
Since, South Korea has faced on the political conflict, my December was unusual with the chaotic circumstances built.
>>> My December was different because South Korea was embroiled in a political conflict, which created unstable circumstances.
Fortunately, my personal time for this December was silent enough to enjoy the thing I really want to do such as jamming with my busking group members.
>>> Fortunately, my personal time for this December was quiet enough to enjoy the things I really want to do, such as jamming and busking with my group members.
Lastly, I felt warmer in my room than before I bought small heater.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Finally, I felt warmer in my room than I did before purchasing a small heater.
Hope this winter passes with warmer room temperature.
>>> I hope this winter passes with warmer room temperature.
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