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How did you handle moments of frustration or stress during the trip?

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2024-12-27 515

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There was many things of moments of frustration or stress during the trip.
Nebertheless, It was first-time in this trip case.
When I under stress, I used to decide to never come here again. However, I easily forgot to this decision.
Because I usually remember the situation as a kind of memories and almost moments of frustration or stress chaged just happening or making fun after passing some times.
So, I used to think of the things just as happenning and a kind of episodes in my life.
But, In this trip case, It was different.
I didn't have any ideas because of about my son, even though he was sick.
So, I needed some alternatives, searched on internet and prepared some measures.
But I didn't know which one was nice, couldn't decide anyting at that time.
Everything is confusing.
My son is still sick. but I think he's gonna be better.
I don't regret that didn't decied anyting. I thought It was my best choice.

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Hello, Stella! Things like these can really happen during trips. It may not have been perfect, but I know you handled everything well. ^^ I hope your son gets better soon. Happy New Year to you and your family!
~T. Jewel
There was many things of moments of frustration or stress during the trip.
>>There were many moments of frustration or stress during our trip.
Nebertheless, It was first-time in this trip case.
>>Nevertheless, it was the first time this happened on the trip.
When I under stress, I used to decide to never come here again.
>>When I was under stress, I used to decide never to come here again.
 However, I easily forgot to this decision.
>>However, I easily forgot this decision.
Because I usually remember the situation as a kind of memories and almost moments of frustration or stress chaged just happening or making fun after passing some times.
>>Because I usually remember the situation as a kind of memory, and most moments of frustration or stress change into something that becomes funny after some time.
So, I used to think of the things just as happenning and a kind of episodes in my life.
>>So, I used to think of those things as just happening, like episodes in my life.
But, In this trip case, It was different.
>>But in this case, it was different.
I didn't have any ideas because of about my son, even though he was sick.
>>I didn't have any idea about it because my son was sick.
So, I needed some alternatives, searched on internet and prepared some measures.
>>So, I needed some alternatives, searched the internet, and prepared some measures.
But I didn't know which one was nice, couldn't decide anyting at that time.
>>But I didn't know which one was nice and couldn't decide anything at that time.
Everything is confusing.
>>Everything was so confusing.
My son is still sick. but I think he's gonna be better.
>>My son is still sick, but I know he'll get better.
I don't regret that didn't decied anyting.
>>I don't regret not making any decisions.
I thought It was my best choice.
>>I thought it was my best choice.
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