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What advice would you give to someone who just got into a minor car accident?

작성자: 오*영
2024-12-27 361

회원님의 영작문

At first, you have to calm down.
And Call the police office for enroll the accident.
In my case, I called the police man to the accident place, but you don't need to do this.
It's enought to enroll the accident to police office.
Second, you have to request someone who happen the car accident to enroll the insurance for man and the car. And you receive the insurance number.
Because you need the insurance number when go hospital and also fix the car.
Last, Don't be lazy to go hospital.
You can feel not bad and might be better faster than you thought.
But you steadily have to go hospital a few weeks or more months.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! Thank you for sharing these practical and useful tips. Being in a car accident can be very traumatizing; however, we should always be prepared for these things. Always take care. Drive safely. ^^
~T. Jewel
At first, you have to calm down.
>>First, you need to calm down.
And Call the police office for enroll the accident.
>>Then, call the police to report the accident.
In my case, I called the police man to the accident place, but you don't need to do this.
>>In my case, I called the police to the accident site, but you don't need to do this.
It's enought to enroll the accident to police office.
>>It's enough to report the accident to the police.
Second, you have to request someone who happen the car accident to enroll the insurance for man and the car. 
>>Second, you have to ask the person involved in the car accident to file an insurance claim for both the person and the car.
And you receive the insurance number.
>>Then, you will receive the insurance number.
Because you need the insurance number when go hospital and also fix the car.
>>You need the insurance number when you go to the hospital and when you have your car fixed.
Last, Don't be lazy to go hospital.
>>Lastly, don't be lazy about going to the hospital.
You can feel not bad and might be better faster than you thought.
>>You might not feel too bad and could recover faster than you thought.
But you steadily have to go hospital a few weeks or more months.
>>But you will need to go to the hospital for a few weeks or even months.
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