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What do you like best about family gatherings?

>>> Honestly there is nothing good to me but I enjoy seeing grandmather's smile. I think gradmather might be the happiest person during family gathering. It is because it is what she has made for all of her life. Seeing her family talking with and laughing together, she can feel something warm that can't be easily explained. Looking at her smile is one of my pleasures when famile gathers

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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
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What do you like best about family gatherings?

>>> Honestly, there is nothing good to me but I enjoy seeing grandmather's smile. 
>> Honestly, there is nothing good to me but I enjoy seeing grandmother's smile. 
I think gradmather might be the happiest person during family gathering. 
>> I think my grandmother is the happiest person during the family gathering. 
It is because it is what she has made for all of her life. 
>> It is because it is what she has made for us all of her life. 
Seeing her family talking with and laughing together, she can feel something warm that can't be easily explained. 
>> CORRECT!
Looking at her smile is one of my pleasures when famile gathers
>> Looking at her smile is one of my pleasures when the family gathers together.


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