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Do you think dreams have any meaning?

작성자: 이*희
2024-12-24 286

회원님의 영작문

I think that having dreams is very important. If I don't have dreams, I don't have worth of life. If I have dreams, I have to do everything. If I don't have dreams,it is don't have goal. I think that dreams is my goal. When I have to go top, I need map.
If I don't have map, I don't know direction to go top. Dreams seems like map. Sometimes I lose my dreams. At this time I feel running out of gas. I always find and remind my dreams. If you don't have dreams, you are dead.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eva,

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on dreams. I love your comparison of dreams to a map, it’s such a creative and meaningful way to explain how important dreams are in guiding us through life. Without dreams, it’s easy to feel lost or without purpose, just like being without a map.

It’s also inspiring that you remind yourself of your dreams when you feel tired or unmotivated. That shows a lot of strength and determination. Keep holding on to your dreams and moving forward, they give life direction and make every step worthwhile.

Happy holidays, and see you on Thursday!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think that having dreams is very important.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe that having dreams is very important.

If I don't have dreams, I don't have worth of life.

>>If I don't have dreams, I don't have a sense of worth in life.

If I have dreams, I have to do everything.

>>CORRECT

OR>>If I have dreams, I have to do everything I can to achieve them.

If I don't have dreams,it is don't have goal.

>>If I don't have dreams, I don't have any goals.

I think that dreams is my goal.

>>I think that dreams are my goals.

When I have to go top, I need map.

>>When I have to go to the top, I need a map.

If I don't have map, I don't know direction to go top.

>>If I don't have a map, I don't know the direction to go to the top.

Dreams seems like map.

>>Dreams seem like a map.

Sometimes I lose my dreams.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Sometimes, I lose sight of my dreams.

At this time I feel running out of gas.

>>At this time, I feel like I'm running out of gas.

I always find and remind my dreams.

>>I always find and remind myself of my dreams.

If you don't have dreams, you are dead.

>>CORRECT

OR>>If you don't have dreams, it's like you're not truly alive.

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