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How can we educate others about environmental issues?

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We have a lot of environmental problem. We are making too much waste every day. We are polluting air and water. Our earth is getting sick. We need to take care of our place. But how to do this? We can't sloved big problems. But we can act a little things. For example I don't thoughlessly throw garbage. I can separate garbage. I can cut down my spending. I can ride a bicycle instead of car. If we try small things every day, our earth getting a little good.

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Hello Eva,

Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job highlighting the environmental challenges we face, such as waste and pollution. It's true that while we can't solve all the big problems at once, small actions can make a real difference. Simple steps like recycling, reducing waste, and using eco-friendly transportation, like riding a bicycle, are all effective ways to help improve the health of our planet. By making small changes, we can all contribute to a healthier Earth. Keep spreading awareness and encouraging positive actions, these little steps truly add up. Merry Christmas, I hope a great year waits for you ahead!

~Teacher Cathy


We have a lot of environmental problem.

>>We have a lot of environmental problems.

We are making too much waste every day.

>>CORRECT

OR>>We generate too much waste every day.

We are polluting air and water.

>>We are polluting the air and water.

Our earth is getting sick.

>>Our Earth is getting sick.

We need to take care of our place.

>>CORRECT

OR>>We need to take care of our planet.

But how to do this?

>>But how can this be done?

We can't sloved big problems.

>>We can't solve big problems.

But we can act a little things.

>>But we can take small actions.

For example I don't thoughlessly throw garbage.

>>For example, I don¡¯t thoughtlessly throw garbage away.

I can separate garbage.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I can sort the trash.

I can cut down my spending.

>>I can cut down on my spending.

I can ride a bicycle instead of car.

>>I can ride a bicycle instead of a car.

If we try small things every day, our earth getting a little good.

>>If we try small things every day, our Earth will get a little better.

 

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