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영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Please change difficult words to easy words and correct them so that IELTS Speaking 6.5 or higher sc

작성자: 이*인
2024-12-22 131

회원님의 영작문

Are your reading habits now different than before?
Do you often read books? When?
à I don’t read as often as I used to because of my busy schedule, but I still enjoy reading before bed. These days, I prefer short articles or e-books over long novels.

Do you read more or less now than when you were younger?
à I read less now than when I was younger because of my busy schedule. However, I still try to read in my free time, focusing on shorter articles or e-books rather than long novels.

Do you find it easy to fall asleep when sitting on a sofa?
Do you feel sleepy when you are sitting down?
à I sometimes feel sleepy when I sit for too long, especially in the afternoon. It’s easy to doze off on a comfortable sofa if I’m tired.

When you were a kid, did you usually sit on the floor?
à Yes, when I was a kid, I often sat on the floor while playing games or reading books. It was comfortable and common, especially during family gatherings or while sitting on a warm floor in winter.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Monday YOUNG IN! Monday provides an opportunity to reflect on your goals for the week ahead. If you are working on something that you really care about, you don’t have to be pushed. The vision pulls you! Keep your balance!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Are your reading habits now different than before?
Do you often read books? When?
I don’t read as often as I used to because of my busy schedule, but I still enjoy reading before bed. These days, I prefer short articles or e-books over long novels.
>>> I don’t read as much as I used to because of my busy schedule, but I still enjoy reading before bed. Lately, I prefer short articles or e-books over long novels.

Do you read more or less now than when you were younger?
I read less now than when I was younger because of my busy schedule. However, I still try to read in my free time, focusing on shorter articles or e-books rather than long novels.
>>> I read less now due to my busy schedule, but I still try to read in my free time, focusing on short articles or e-books instead of long novels.

Do you find it easy to fall asleep when sitting on a sofa?
Do you feel sleepy when you are sitting down?
I sometimes feel sleepy when I sit for too long, especially in the afternoon. It’s easy to doze off on a comfortable sofa if I’m tired.
>>>I sometimes feel sleepy when sitting for too long, especially in the afternoon. If I'm tired, it's easy to doze off on a comfortable sofa.

When you were a kid, did you usually sit on the floor?
Yes, when I was a kid, I often sat on the floor while playing games or reading books. It was comfortable and common, especially during family gatherings or while sitting on a warm floor in winter.
>>>Yes, when I was a kid, I often sat on the floor while playing games or reading books. It was comfortable and common, especially during family gatherings or while sitting on a warm floor in winter.


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