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How do financial issues/problems affect relationships?

>>> If the word "relationships" that you mentioned means only the relationship between me and my GF and I consider only our case, our financial issues/problems doesn't affect relationships. Maybe it's because we're young and didn't married yet. We can spend all of day talking calmly in cafe by using two bottles of coffee prices. Of course, if our pocket money are not enough, we can't eat very delicious food like sasimi that I love and beef that she loves. But it is not a problem that could make our mood bad. Although we don't have enough money to do FLEX(do you know this word? kk) , we expect our future day where we can do new things or eat expensive food with our fat payment. Because this time existed, future will be more valued. Expecting drinking good coffee in expensive restaurant with good mood, we are going to drink cheap americano in common cafe with excellent mood.

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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

How do financial issues/problems affect relationships?

>>> If the word "relationships" that you mentioned means only the relationship between me and my GF and I consider only our case, our financial issues/problems doesn't affect relationships.
>>  If the word "relationships" that you mentioned means only the relationship between me and my GF and I consider only our case, our financial issues/problems don't affect relationships.
Maybe it's because we're young and didn't married yet. 
>> Maybe it's because we're young and not married yet. 
We can spend all of day talking calmly in cafe by using two bottles of coffee prices. 
>> We can spend all day talking calmly in a cafe while sipping a cup of coffee.
Of course, if our pocket money are not enough, we can't eat very delicious food like sashimi that I love and beef that she loves. 
>> CORRECT!
But it is not a problem that could make our mood bad. 
>> CORRECT!
Although we don't have enough money to do FLEX(do you know this word? kk) , we expect our future day where we can do new things or eat expensive food with our fat payment. 
>> Although we don't have enough money to FLEX (do you know this word? kk), we envision our future where we can do new things or eat expensive food with our fat bank account. 
Because this time existed, future will be more valued. 
>> CORRECT!
Expecting drinking good coffee in expensive restaurant with good mood, we are going to drink cheap americano in common cafe with excellent mood.
>> CORRECT!

(Yep, I know the word "flex" kkkk, it's a slang that many people use. :D  ~ T. Camille)
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