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We are easy to go to other country for trip and business. We can go to the other side of the world to take a airplan. Also, We are easy to listen other country's music, see the dramas, movie and vlog in youtube. We are getting near by different country's culture. I think It is unavoidable trend. But I would like to keep each country's unique, conventional culture, like Korean food, Korean traditional clothes, etc. Each country should have to try to keep their special culture at various perfectively.

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Good day to you Ms. Ella! Thanks for waking up so early to talk to me. I know it's exhausting however, I appreciate your effort of being diligent every day especially learning the language enthusiastically. Keep yourself focused and soon enough you'll hit your target! Have a great weekend~!^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
We are easy to go to other country for trip and business. 
>>> We find it easy to travel abroad for both leisure and business purposes.
We can go to the other side of the world to take a airplan. 
>>> We can travel to the other side of the world by plane.
Also, We are easy to listen other country's music, see the dramas, movie and vlog in youtube. 
>>> Additionally, we can easily listen to music from other countries and watch dramas, movies, and vlogs on YouTube.
We are getting near by different country's culture. 
>>> We are becoming more connected to the cultures of different countries.
I think It is unavoidable trend. 
>>>I think it is an inevitable trend.
But I would like to keep each country's unique, conventional culture, like Korean food, Korean traditional clothes, etc.
>>> However, I would like to preserve each country's unique, traditional culture, such as Korean food, traditional clothing, and more.
 Each country should have to try to keep their special culture at various perfectively.
>>> Each country should make an effort to preserve and promote its unique culture in various ways.
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