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1. The bird__ (fly) away when it __ (hear) the noise. (was flying), (heared)
2. His father __ (die) last year. (died)
3. I __ (meet) James yesterday. (had met)
4. We __ (discuss) his plans. (discussed)
5. I __ (go) to Delhi last month. (went)
6. I __(know) his motives. (know)
7. He __ (ask) an interesting question. (asks)

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Hello Yeong Do!!!

Thanks for doing your effort in this homework. Have time to study the corrections and feel free to ask me about this during our class. Your homework was impressive! You did really elaborate everything. Great job!


Teacher Jeny


1. The bird__ (fly) away when it __ (hear) the noise. (was flying), (heared)
>>The bird flew away when it heard the noise.
2. His father __ (die) last year. (died)
>>correct
3. I __ (meet) James yesterday. (had met)
>>I met James yesterday.
4. We __ (discuss) his plans. (discussed)
>>correct
5. I __ (go) to Delhi last month. (went)
>>correct
6. I __(know) his motives. (know)
>>correct
7. He __ (ask) an interesting question. (asks)
>>He asked an interesting question.
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