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Do you think service jobs are respected in your country? Why or why not?

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2024-12-17 400

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I think service jobs are not expected in my country.
Actually, behavior toward treatment tends to be developing. For example, when you talk on the phone with a bank or various service centers, the call contents will be recorded before the conversation begins, and the counselor will be said to be someone's family.
So, swearing at the counselor is subject to punishment.
Despite these efforts, people who work in the service are still treated as a game NPC. People don't greet them as if they don't have feelings, or sometimes demand a rude and unreasonable thing to them as if they have to do the job for granted.
I worked part-time in various service jobs, and I reflected a lot.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Seo Yeon~
Working in the service industry is difficult, I must admit. As you said below, I have experienced the same treatment from others. Because you have to keep your work, you will always end up pleasing people, even if they are already acting irrationally. It was somewhat upsetting, especially if you don't have a strong personality. However, it's great that some management has now started to take into account the idea of treating clients and employees equally. ^_^
Chammy 
I think service jobs are not expected in my country.
>> I think service jobs are not respected in my country.
Actually, behavior toward treatment tends to be developing.
 For example, when you talk on the phone with a bank or various service centers, the call contents will be recorded before the conversation begins, and the counselor will be said to be someone's family.
So, swearing at the counselor is subject to punishment.
>>Correct
Despite these efforts, people who work in the service are still treated as a game NPC.
OR
>> Service workers continue to be treated as outcasts despite their efforts.
People don't greet them as if they don't have feelings, or sometimes demand a rude and unreasonable thing to them as if they have to do the job for granted.
>> People don't greet them as if they don't have feelings or sometimes impolitely demand unreasonable things from them as if they have to take the job for granted.
I worked part-time in various service jobs, and I reflected a lot.
Or
>> I recalled memories as I also worked part-time in various service jobs. 
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