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What do you do to make your weekends special with your family?

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My family is definitely special to me.
There was a time when I tried to prepare something special for my special family that I sometimes meet, not every day.
Planning a short trip or giving a special gift is also a good choice.
But what I feel in life is the most special is the most ordinary.
These ordinary daily lives are actually special, going for a walk together, eating street food together, or going to the market together to buy necessities or miscellaneous goods for my family.
We don't do this together anymore.
We eat together at an atmospheric restaurant, but we don't eat street food together and laugh together.
If my family writes down the list we need to buy for grocery shopping, I will go and buy it by car, but we won't go shopping by pushing the cart together and tasting food.
As the family grows older, we become less together.
Something special is actually not special.
Our ordinary daily lives are special.

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Hi David. I just wanted to let you know how heartwarming your responses to the homework topic are. Your thoughtful reflections and ability to connect personal experiences with the material really stand out. It's clear you put a lot of effort into understanding and engaging with the topic, and I truly appreciate the sincerity in your words. Keep up the great work! I¡¯m excited to see more of your thoughts and insights in your upcoming homework topics.


~ T. Lia


My family is definitely special to me.
>> CORRECT

There was a time when I tried to prepare something special for my special family that I sometimes meet, not every day.
>> There was a time when I tried to prepare something special for my family, whom I don't see every day.

Planning a short trip or giving a special gift is also a good choice.
>> CORRECT

But what I feel in life is the most special is the most ordinary.
>> But what I feel is the most special in life is the most ordinary.

These ordinary daily lives are actually special, going for a walk together, eating street food together, or going to the market together to buy necessities or miscellaneous goods for my family.
>> These ordinary daily moments are actually special: going for a walk together, eating street food together, or going to the market together to buy necessities or miscellaneous goods for my family.

We don't do this together anymore.
>> CORRECT

We eat together at an atmospheric restaurant, but we don't eat street food together and laugh together.
>> We eat together at an atmospheric restaurant, but we don't eat street food together or laugh together anymore.

If my family writes down the list we need to buy for grocery shopping, I will go and buy it by car, but we won't go shopping by pushing the cart together and tasting food.
>> If my family writes down the list of things we need for grocery shopping, I will go and buy it by car, but we won't go shopping together, pushing the cart and tasting food.

As the family grows older, we become less together.
>> As the family grows older, we spend less time together.

Something special is actually not special.
>> CORRECT

Our ordinary daily lives are special.
>> CORRECT


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