무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

What do you do to make your weekends special with your family?

작성자: 노*철
2024-12-17 405

회원님의 영작문

My family is definitely special to me.
There was a time when I tried to prepare something special for my special family that I sometimes meet, not every day.
Planning a short trip or giving a special gift is also a good choice.
But what I feel in life is the most special is the most ordinary.
These ordinary daily lives are actually special, going for a walk together, eating street food together, or going to the market together to buy necessities or miscellaneous goods for my family.
We don't do this together anymore.
We eat together at an atmospheric restaurant, but we don't eat street food together and laugh together.
If my family writes down the list we need to buy for grocery shopping, I will go and buy it by car, but we won't go shopping by pushing the cart together and tasting food.
As the family grows older, we become less together.
Something special is actually not special.
Our ordinary daily lives are special.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi David. I just wanted to let you know how heartwarming your responses to the homework topic are. Your thoughtful reflections and ability to connect personal experiences with the material really stand out. It's clear you put a lot of effort into understanding and engaging with the topic, and I truly appreciate the sincerity in your words. Keep up the great work! I’m excited to see more of your thoughts and insights in your upcoming homework topics.


~ T. Lia


My family is definitely special to me.
>> CORRECT

There was a time when I tried to prepare something special for my special family that I sometimes meet, not every day.
>> There was a time when I tried to prepare something special for my family, whom I don't see every day.

Planning a short trip or giving a special gift is also a good choice.
>> CORRECT

But what I feel in life is the most special is the most ordinary.
>> But what I feel is the most special in life is the most ordinary.

These ordinary daily lives are actually special, going for a walk together, eating street food together, or going to the market together to buy necessities or miscellaneous goods for my family.
>> These ordinary daily moments are actually special: going for a walk together, eating street food together, or going to the market together to buy necessities or miscellaneous goods for my family.

We don't do this together anymore.
>> CORRECT

We eat together at an atmospheric restaurant, but we don't eat street food together and laugh together.
>> We eat together at an atmospheric restaurant, but we don't eat street food together or laugh together anymore.

If my family writes down the list we need to buy for grocery shopping, I will go and buy it by car, but we won't go shopping by pushing the cart together and tasting food.
>> If my family writes down the list of things we need for grocery shopping, I will go and buy it by car, but we won't go shopping together, pushing the cart and tasting food.

As the family grows older, we become less together.
>> As the family grows older, we spend less time together.

Something special is actually not special.
>> CORRECT

Our ordinary daily lives are special.
>> CORRECT
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
137640 Do you think fancy restaurants serve more delicious food than... 김*기 완료 2024-06-05 1488
137639 Homework 김*서 완료 2024-06-05 0
137638 If you could have a conversation with any famous living person,... 박*은 완료 2024-06-05 949
137637 What do you like to do with your free time? Do you prefer to... 황*은 완료 2024-06-05 1281
137636 homework 김*별 완료 2024-06-05 2
137635 Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have... 황*하 완료 2024-06-05 1116
137634 Homework 류*우 완료 2024-06-05 929
137633 Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things... 황*하 완료 2024-06-05 1859
137632 Compare and contrast the perspectives on obesity presented in... 안*윤 완료 2024-06-05 1620
137631 HOMEWORK FOR 06.05.2024 임*지 완료 2024-06-05 4
137630 Describe your first job interview. 박*연 완료 2024-06-05 1191
137629 What makes it easy/difficult to land a high-paying job in your... 박*연 완료 2024-06-05 1022
137628 What’s the best way to get things done on time? 최*영 완료 2024-06-05 1
137627 What does art mean to you personally? 박*은 완료 2024-06-05 1349
137626 How do you stay conscious of your health and well-being? 박*은 완료 2024-06-05 995
137625 Homework 정*환 완료 2024-06-05 973
137624 6/3 home work 장*휴 완료 2024-06-05 2
137623 Challenges next generation will face with 양*연 완료 2024-06-05 854
137622 “Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.” What do you think this... 박*호 완료 2024-06-05 1416
137621 4.Jun.2024 김*정 완료 2024-06-05 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]