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If you could receive one special Christmas gift this year what would it be?

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If you could receive one special Christmas gift this year what would it be?

Suprisingly,
My son asked this kind of quesion to me, today's morning.
He asked me which one I wanted to choose healty or lucky
if i could recieve one gift.
So I answered that I wanted to get healty for gift. Because I think that healty equals lucky to getting older people.
Soon my son told me, again.
Once upon a time, There is one painful man.
He received lucky for the gift. so, He could tell some wishes luckly to god . so He wanted a lot of things. For example, He wanted recover from the ill so, he could get healthy.
He wanted much money, so, He was rich.
Result, He could live happily forever.
I laughed at the story and I could understand that I should have chosen the lucky.
However, I won't to change my mind that receving the healthy. Because We can't get healhy suddenly, luckly.
If we want to get more healthier than before ,
then I know that we have to try more things.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! It's probably difficult to choose between being lucky and being healthy. However, I agree with you that being healthy is just as good as being lucky. ^^ Thank you for sharing an interesting story from your son. Have a great weekend!
~T. Jewel
Suprisingly, My son asked this kind of quesion to me, today's morning.
>>Suprisingly, my son asked me this kind of question this morning.
He asked me which one I wanted to choose healty or lucky if i could recieve one gift.
>>He asked me which one I wanted to choose, healthy or lucky, if I could receive one gift.
OR
>>He asked me if I would choose to be healthy or lucky if I could receive one gift.
So I answered that I wanted to get healty for gift.
>>So I answered that I wanted to be healthy as a gift.
Because I think that healty equals lucky to getting older people.
>>Because I think that being healthy is equal to being lucky as you get older.
Soon my son told me, again.
>>Then, my son told me a story.
Once upon a time, There is one painful man.
>>Once upon a time, there was a sick man.
He received lucky for the gift. 
>>He received luck as a gift.
OR
>>He became lucky as a gift.
so, He could tell some wishes luckly to god . 
>>So, he could luckily tell some wishes to God.
so He wanted a lot of things. 
>>He wanted a lot of things.
For example, He wanted recover from the ill so, he could get healthy.
>>For example, he wanted to recover from his illness so he could get healthy.
He wanted much money, so, He was rich.
>>He wanted a lot of money, so he became rich.
Result, He could live happily forever.
>>As a result, he lived happily ever after.
I laughed at the story and I could understand that I should have chosen the lucky.
>>I laughed at the story, and I understood that I should have chosen being lucky.
However, I won't to change my mind that receving the healthy. Because We can't get healhy suddenly, luckly.
>>However, I won't change my mind about being healthy, because we can't suddenly get healthy, luckily.
If we want to get more healthier than before , then I know that we have to try more things.
>>If we want to get healthier than before, then I know we have to try more things.
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