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Hi Teacher Divina,
Happy Thursday,
Thank you for giving me homework.
Homework
How do family members help each other in your home?
My answer
My family members help each other with housworks .
And my parents always help me and my brother.
They pay costs what I want to do something.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. My family members help each other with housworks .
>>My family members help each other with the housework.

2. And my parents always help me and my brother.
>>My parents always help me and my brother.

3. They pay costs what I want to do something.
>>They pay for the costs when I want to do something.

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