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Is having a friend important? Why?

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2024-12-11 42

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I think having friends is important.
An extrovert like me is even more important and necessary.
First of all, you need to have a friend to feel less lonely.
If you're alone in the world, there's nothing more lonely than that.
Also, society is a world where we live together.
I think we can make friends and learn to help each other and help each other and help each other by meeting.
In addition, friends can be targeted or stimulated as a role model.
It's important because it's a friend that can effect well for you.
Expecially during adolescence, when friendship is important.

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Hi Yun, 

Friendship indeed is something we need. 
Like you said, they make us feel less lonely, and I think they make us feel more alive.
They also inspire us to be better. 

~ Teacher Gina

I think having friends is important.
>> CORRECT.
An extrovert like me is even more important and necessary.
>> It's even more important and necessary for an extrovert like me. 
First of all, you need to have a friend to feel less lonely.
>> CORRECT.
If you're alone in the world, there's nothing more lonely than that.
>> If you're alone in the world, there's nothing lonelier than that.
Also, society is a world where we live together.
>> Society is a world where we all live together.
I think we can make friends and learn to help each other and help each other and help each other by meeting.
>> I think that by meeting and interacting with others, we can make friends, learn to support one another, and grow together.
In addition, friends can be targeted or stimulated as a role model.
>> CORRECT.
It's important because it's a friend that can effect well for you. Expecially during adolescence, when friendship is important.
>> It's important because it's a friend that can affect you well, especially during adolescence, when friendship is important.

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