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What is the most difficult thing about making a presentation?

>>> Although I hadn't maken a presentation many times, practicing is the most important thing. Of course, contents of the presentation is 0th place. On the premise that the content is solid, sending contents to others well has to be considered. To show my purpose to audience with good image, I should practice more and more. After memorizing the script, speaking alone as if I'm in front of audience must be proceeded. To make a good presentation in my english class exam last week, I actually speaked alone many times by watching a monitor with a picture of the interviewes. Thanks to this practicing, I finally had a good presentation score.

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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
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What is the most difficult thing about making a presentation?

>>> Although I hadn't maken a presentation many times, practicing is the most important thing. 
>> Although I haven't made a presentation many times, practicing is the most important thing. 
Of course, contents of the presentation is nth place. 
>> CORRECT!
On the premise that the content is solid, sending contents to others as well has to be considered. 
>> CORRECT!
To show my purpose to audience with a good image, I should practice more and more. 
>> To show my purpose to the audience with a good image, I should practice more and more. 
After memorizing the script, speaking alone as if I'm in front of audience must be proceeded.
>> After memorizing the script, speaking alone as if I'm in front of the audience must be proceeded.
To make a good presentation in my English class exam last week, I actually speaked alone many times by watching a monitor with a picture of the interviewes. 
>> When I made a good presentation in my English class exam last week, I actually spoke alone many times by watching a monitor with a picture of the interviewers
Thanks to this practicing, I finally had a good presentation score.
>> Thanks to this method, I finally had a good presentation score.

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