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What made you interested in doing Mixed Martial Arts?

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I have intrested sports for a long time. When i was 16, my friend introduced me to UFC. So i intrested in UFC and i want to learn Mixed Martial Arts.

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Good morning, Jun!
We have motivating factors in getting interested in certain hobbies or activities and thank you for sharing this because nowadays, young people are interested in boxing, sumo wrestling, and MMA which were not common in the past. 
Have a good day!
T. Aki~

I have intrested sports for a long time.
>>> I have been interested in sports for a long time.

When i was 16, my friend introduced me to UFC.
>>>  When I was 16, my friend introduced me to UFC.

So i intrested in UFC and i want to learn Mixed Martial Arts.
>> So I got interested in UFC and I want to learn Mixed Martial Arts.
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