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How do you feel when someone is kind to you?

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2024-12-09 1133

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Generally, it feels good when someone is kind to you.
I feel grateful from someone and I feel good.
I also want to do the same to others for the kindness I received from someone.
But some people may feel a little uncomfortable with someone being nice.
Because those people may not be used to being kind, or they may not be used to receiving something.
In addition, there are many people with strange purposes these days, so if someone treats you kindly, you may have doubts first.
Don't get hurt mind if someone suspected you.
It's not that you're weird, it's that the world is crazy.

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts about my question. 
I truly agree with you, especially towards the end. 
It feels nice that there are kind people, but since the world we're living in is full of crazy things, I think it is okay to be doubtful sometimes. 
It makes us safe.~ 

~ Teacher Gina

Generally, it feels good when someone is kind to you.
>> CORRECT.
I feel grateful from someone and I feel good.
>> I feel grateful when someone shows me kindness, and it makes me feel good. 
I also want to do the same to others for the kindness I received from someone.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It also inspires me to pass on the kindness I¡¯ve received to others.
But some people may feel a little uncomfortable with someone being nice.
>> CORRECT.
Because those people may not be used to being kind, or they may not be used to receiving something.
>> CORRECT.
In addition, there are many people with strange purposes these days, so if someone treats you kindly, you may have doubts first.
>> CORRECT.
Don't get hurt mind if someone suspected you.
>> Don't get hurt if someone suspects you. 
>> Or: If someone doubts your intentions, don¡¯t take it to heart
It's not that you're weird, it's that the world is crazy.
>> It's not that you're weird; it's the world that is crazy. 
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