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Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Do you have a favorite teacher?
I don¡¯t want to be a teacher, but I do remember my high school English teacher who inspired me to love learning. I¡¯m not in touch with my primary school teachers, but my favourite teacher helped me build confidence and encouraged me to pursue my interests.

Did you ride a bike when you were little?
Are bikes popular in China?
Do you often ride a bike now?
Do you have a bike now?
Did you have a bike when you were young?
I rode a bike when I was young and enjoyed it. Bikes are popular in many countries, including China. I don¡¯t ride a bike much now, but I did have one when I was a child.

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Thank you for entrusting me to simplify your answers Young In. I hope you'll be able to remember all these responses. Good luck! 

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Do you have a favorite teacher?
>>> 
I don't want to be a teacher, but I remember my high school English teacher who made me love learning. Though I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers, my favorite one helped me gain confidence and follow my interests.

Did you ride a bike when you were little?

Are bikes popular in China?
Do you often ride a bike now?
Do you have a bike now?
Did you have a bike when you were young?
>>> I liked riding a bike when I was young. Bikes are common in many countries, including China. I don¡¯t ride one now, but I had one as a child.

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