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Which is a better reading material, fiction or nonfiction?

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This essay argues that nonfiction is a better reading material due to its accuracy of information, its ability to solve real-world problems, and its contribution to personal growth.

First, nonfiction provides accurate information based on facts, allowing readers to gain reliable knowledge. Various nonfiction genres, such as history books, science texts, and biographies, help readers deeply understand actual events or theories. For instance, by reading history books, we learn about past events and gain insights necessary to understand contemporary society. In contrast, fiction is based on imagination and may sometimes contain content that is far removed from reality, which can undermine the reliability of the information.

Second, nonfiction aids in solving real-world problems. Many people face various challenges in their daily lives, and nonfiction materials offer practical solutions.

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This essay argues that nonfiction is better reading material due to its accuracy of information, its ability to solve real-world problems, and its contribution to personal growth.
>> CORRECT
First, nonfiction provides accurate information based on facts, allowing readers to gain reliable knowledge. 
>> CORRECT
Various nonfiction genres, such as history books, science texts, and biographies, help readers deeply understand actual events or theories. 
>> CORRECT
For instance, by reading history books, we learn about past events and gain insights necessary to understand contemporary society. 
>> CORRECT
In contrast, fiction is based on imagination and may sometimes contain content that is far removed from reality, which can undermine the reliability of the information.
>> CORRECT
Second, nonfiction aids in solving real-world problems. Many people face various challenges in their daily lives, and nonfiction materials offer practical solutions.
>> CORRECT
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