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Q) Write about your favourite book.

A) My favorite book in my life is "Crime and Punishment" by Russian writer Fyodor Mikhailovich Dostoevsky.
This book is about committing a murder with the misconception that he can realize social justice by killing a loan shark who he thinks is of no help to the world, and eventually living in prison in Siberia, loving a woman and reflecting his life.
It contains that no matter how guilty a person is, humans themselves should never be used as a tool for punishment, and their crimes cannot be rationalized no matter how good their intentions are.
I read this book 40 years ago, and it was difficult because the book was thick and the content of the book was psychologically expressed, but I read it so deeply that I can tell everyone that it is my favorite book.

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Hi David, I enjoyed reading your essay about your favorite book, "Crime and Punishment." You captured the themes of justice and morality beautifully, and your reflection on its psychological depth was compelling. It¡¯s clear how much the story resonated with you. Keep it up!

~ T. Lia

My favorite book in my life is "Crime and Punishment" by Russian writer Fyodor Mikhailovich Dostoevsky.
>> CORRECT

This book is about committing a murder with the misconception that he can realize social justice by killing a loan shark who he thinks is of no help to the world, and eventually living in prison in Siberia, loving a woman and reflecting his life.
>> This book is about committing a murder under the misconception that social justice can be achieved by killing a loan shark whom he believes is of no help to the world, and eventually living in prison in Siberia, falling in love with a woman, and reflecting on his life.

It contains that no matter how guilty a person is, humans themselves should never be used as a tool for punishment, and their crimes cannot be rationalized no matter how good their intentions are.
>> It conveys that no matter how guilty a person is, humans should never be used as tools for punishment, and their crimes cannot be justified, no matter how good their intentions are.

I read this book 40 years ago, and it was difficult because the book was thick and the content of the book was psychologically expressed, but I read it so deeply that I can tell everyone that it is my favorite book.
>> I read this book 40 years ago, and it was challenging because it was lengthy and its content was psychologically complex, but I read it so thoroughly that I can confidently say it is my favorite book.
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