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People measure the rich from their wives car.
Because most of wives's cars are their second car.
I can't ignore their decisions about the car .
If I have a small car which has 1000cc engine.
I won't drive . In my case ,I can drive small car until 49 years old in Seoul.
Especially only Korean prefer the big car.
Brand is not important to me.
But I considerate the proper size car in my ages.

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Hello Ms. Sunny!
Thank you for this. I am just curious about your last statement that the "age" also has something to do in owning a car.
What do you mean by that?
Aki~


People measure the rich from their wife's car.
>>> People measure the wealth of a person based on their wives' car.

Because most of wives's cars are their second car.
>>>  Because most of the wives' cars are their husbands' second cars.
  
I can't ignore their decisions about the car .
>>> I can't blame them for thinking that way.

If I have a small car which has 1000cc engine. I won't drive.
>>> If I have a small car that has a 1000cc engine, I won't drive it.
 
 In my case ,I can drive small car until 49 years old in Seoul.
>>> In my case, I can drive a small car until I am 49 years old in Seoul.

Especially only Korean prefer the big car.
>>> Especially only Koreans prefer the big car.

Brand is not important to me.
>>>  The model of the car is not important to me.

But I considerate the proper size car in my ages.
>>> But I have to consider the size of the car.
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