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작성자: 노*철
2024-12-04 513

회원님의 영작문

Q) Write about the challenges and benefits of changing majors in college.
A) The most important thing when choosing a major in college is to choose a major that suits my talent.
Most students spend their middle and high school years thinking that the subjects they received good scores on are suitable for their talent and setting the criteria for selecting majors.
Of course, choosing a major in sports, music and arts is not difficult.
However, in general departments, there are many cases of misjudging one's character and talent.
In this case, changing majors can be a good choice.
Maybe I think a year or two years are wasted, but if we look at the long time of our life, I think a year or two years are a very short time and also the time of good experience.
Although there may be pressure to pay more tuition and change our environment due to the delayed graduation period, I think we have to make a choice because it is the most important time to decide the direction of our life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi David, I just wanted to say how amazed I am once again by your response to this topic. The way you articulate your thoughts and provide such clear, insightful points is truly impressive. You always manage to bring a fresh perspective that makes me think deeper about things. It is a rare talent to explain complex ideas so clearly, and I really admire that about you.


Looking forward to hearing more of your thoughts soon! 


~ T. Lia


The most important thing when choosing a major in college is to choose a major that suits my talent.
>> The most important thing when choosing a major in college is to choose one that suits your talents.

Most students spend their middle and high school years thinking that the subjects they received good scores on are suitable for their talent and setting the criteria for selecting majors.
>> CORRECT or 
>> Most students spend their middle and high school years thinking that the subjects they scored well in are suitable for their talents and use this as a criterion for selecting majors.

Of course, choosing a major in sports, music and arts is not difficult.
>> CORRECT

However, in general departments, there are many cases of misjudging one's character and talent.
>> However, in general fields of study, there are many cases of misjudging one's character and talents.

In this case, changing majors can be a good choice.
>> CORRECT

Maybe I think a year or two years are wasted, but if we look at the long time of our life, I think a year or two years are a very short time and also the time of good experience.
>> You may feel that one or two years are wasted, but if we look at the span of our lives, a year or two is a very short time and can be a valuable learning experience.

Although there may be pressure to pay more tuition and change our environment due to the delayed graduation period, I think we have to make a choice because it is the most important time to decide the direction of our life.
>> Although there may be pressure to pay more tuition and adjust to a new environment due to a delayed graduation period, I believe we must make this choice because it is a critical time to decide the direction of our lives.

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