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Do you prefer to work alone or in a group?
Do you prefer to work at home or in the workplace?

I prefer to work alone, especially at home. Working alone allows me to manage my schedule efficiently and focus better in a comfortable environment.

 

What part of your school do you like the most?
What is your favourite place to study?
Do you prefer to study at home or in a library?

 My favourite part of school is the library. It¡¯s ranked among the top 10 libraries in Korea, and I prefer studying there because it has plenty of resources and a quiet environment, which helps me concentrate better.


What is your favourite place? Why?
Would you take photos when you see a good view?

I love visiting Hanbat Arboretum because it helps me relieve stress from my IELTS studies. The beautiful flowers and colorful leaves there always inspire me, and I enjoy taking photos with my friends when I visit.

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Hi there! You surprised me with your answers! It's my my pleasure to check and simplify them. I hope you could do well on your interview and IELTS exams! Keep youseff busy preparing for these  requirements! Good luck!
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Do you prefer to work alone or in a group?
Do you prefer to work at home or in the workplace?

I prefer to work alone, especially at home. Working alone allows me to manage my schedule efficiently and focus better in a comfortable environment.
>>> CORRECT~!^^ ( This will be fine, Young In)


What part of your school do you like the most?
What is your favorite place to study?
Do you prefer to study at home or in a library?

>>>>My favorite part of school is the library. It's one of the top 10 libraries in Korea, and I enjoy studying there because it has many resources and a quiet atmosphere that helps me focus.


What is your favourite place? Why?
Would you take photos when you see a good view?

>>>I love visiting Hanbat Arboretum because it helps me relieve stress from my IELTS studies. The beautiful flowers and colorful leaves always inspire me. I enjoy taking photos with my friends when I'm there.





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