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How is English different from your mother language?

작성자: 김*린
2024-12-03 6

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Grammar;word order is different. In Korean, we say 'I dog love(나는 개를 사랑한다)' but in English, 'I love dog'. Furthermore there is no honorific in English. I think learning Korean is more tough than learning English. English's grammar is quite simple than other's and that's why English is used as an official language. Hangeul, the Korean alphabet, is easy to pronounce and write and read. Instead, it seems that foreigners find it difficult to learn because of its complicated grammar. It is also difficult for Koreans to learn, as Koreans often do not know spelling or grammar properly.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Lin! You did a great job explaining the differences between Korean and English grammar. Your comparison between the two languages is clear and shows your understanding. I agree that while Korean pronunciation and writing may seem simpler, the grammar can be challenging for both native speakers and learners. Keep up the good work!
~T. Jenna

Grammar;word order is different. 
>>The grammar is different because the word order varies.
OR
>> The grammar differs due to variations in word order.
In Korean, we say 'I dog love(나는 개를 사랑한다)' but in English, 'I love dog'. 
Correct, or
>> In Korean, the expression 'I dog love (나는 개를 사랑한다)' is used, whereas in English, it would be 'I love dogs.'
Furthermore, there is no honorific in English. 
Correct, or
>>Moreover, English lacks an honorific system, which distinguishes it from Korean.
I think learning Korean is more tough than learning English. 
>>I think learning Korean is tougher than learning English.
OR
>>I believe that mastering Korean is more challenging than acquiring proficiency in English.
English's grammar is quite simple than other's and that's why English is used as an official language. 
>>English grammar is simpler than that of others, which is why English is used as an official language.
OR
>>The grammar of English is relatively simpler compared to that of other languages, which contributes to its widespread use as an official language.
Hangeul, the Korean alphabet, is easy to pronounce and write and read. 
>>Hangeul, the Korean alphabet, is easy to pronounce, read, and write.
OR
>>Hangeul, the Korean writing system, is notably straightforward to pronounce, read, and write.
Instead, it seems that foreigners find it difficult to learn because of its complicated grammar. 
Correct, or
>>Conversely, foreigners often find mastering Korean difficult due to its intricate grammatical rules.
It is also difficult for Koreans to learn, as Koreans often do not know spelling or grammar properly.
Correct, or
>>Koreans, too, often grapple with their own language, as the complex spelling and grammar present a significant challenge.
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