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Describe your favorite restaurant or coffee shop where you hang out with your friends.

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When we meet the restaurant is usually changed.
my friends want to go to new place and eat other food.
On the winter we like to have warm dish likes dubling soup.
My tennis club friends always go to the same coffee shop after lunch.
The coffee shop is very small but taste is nice and a coffee shop owner is kind.

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Hello, Ju Mi!I think you and your friends enjoy trying different kinds of food and drinks in different restaurants. ^^ I hope you find some great restaurants and cafes to visit this winter. Have a wonderful weekend!
~ T.Jewel
When we meet the restaurant is usually changed.
>>When we meet, we usually go to different restaurants.
my friends want to go to new place and eat other food.
>>My friends want to go to new places and try different food.
On the winter we like to have warm dish likes dubling soup.
>>In winter, we like to have warm dishes like dumpling soup.
My tennis club friends always go to the same coffee shop after lunch.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>After lunch, my tennis club friends always go to the same coffee shop.

The coffee shop is very small but taste is nice and a coffee shop owner is kind.
>>The coffee shop is very small, but the taste is nice, and the owner is kind.
OR
>>The coffee shop is small, but the coffee tastes great, and the owner is nice.
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