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Do you often greet strangers in public places like on the street, in an elevator, or at the store?

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I don't greet strangers. I don't like greet strangers. When I worked l always greet strangers. Because my workplace visited a lot of people. To greet strangers was one of the my gob. Now I don't need to meet strangers. So I am very happy. I am not interest in other people. I am interest in myself and my family. My coutry people are interest in other people. I don't like it. I am getting old, I am not enough time, so l want to watch my life.

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Hello Eva,

Your perspective on greeting strangers is very clear, and it shows that you value your personal space and time. It's understandable that after working in a job where greeting strangers was required, you'd prefer to focus on yourself and your family now. It's great that you prioritize what truly matters to you. Everyone has different comfort levels when it comes to interacting with others, and it's okay to set boundaries that make you happy. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I can see how thoughtful and self-aware you are!

~Teacher Cathy

               

I don't greet strangers.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I don't acknowledge strangers.

I don't like greet strangers.

>>I don't like greeting strangers.

When I worked l always greet strangers.

>>When I was working, I always greeted strangers.

Because my workplace visited a lot of people.

>>Because a lot of people visited my workplace.

To greet strangers was one of the my gob.

>>To greet strangers was part of my job.

Now I don't need to meet strangers.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Now, I don't need to meet strangers anymore.

So I am very happy.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So I'm glad.

I am not interest in other people.

>>I am not interested in other people.

I am interest in myself and my family.

>>I am interested in myself and my family.

My coutry people are interest in other people.

>>Other people in my country are interested in other people.

I don't like it.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I dislike it.

I am getting old, I am not enough time, so l want to watch my life.

>>I am getting older, and I don¡¯t have enough time, so I want to focus on living my life for myself.

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