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LCDS interview 7,8

작성자: 이*인
2024-11-28 142

회원님의 영작문

7.I would describe my movement texture as dynamic and evolving, with a focus on the tension and release of the body. I often work with controlled, staccato movements that create sharp contrasts, but I also enjoy exploring moments of fluidity where the body can fully release into more flowing, organic shapes. I find that balancing tension with softness allows me to create a more nuanced and expressive performance.

8.The audition workshop at LCDS was a fantastic opportunity to experience firsthand the school’s teaching style and environment. I was impressed by the emphasis on creativity and individual expression. The workshop allowed me to experiment with new movement languages and approaches to choreography, which was both challenging and inspiring. It reaffirmed my desire to be part of this innovative and supportive community where diverse ideas and artistic practices are celebrated.”

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon YOUNG IN!
I was genuinely impressed by your effort in practicing and memorizing. I hope you'd be able to make it on your interview! Don't forget to be confident and keep yourself focused. It's normal to get nervous, so you've got to take a deep breath and be yourself! I tried my best to simplify your answer for some words seem to be difficult.  Keep up the great work!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
7.I would describe my movement texture as dynamic and evolving, with a focus on the tension and release of the body. I often work with controlled, staccato movements that create sharp contrasts, but I also enjoy exploring moments of fluidity where the body can fully release into more flowing, organic shapes. I find that balancing tension with softness allows me to create a more nuanced and expressive performance.
>>>I would describe my movement as dynamic and always changing, with a focus on tension and release in the body. I often use sharp, controlled movements, but I also like exploring smoother, more flowing shapes. Balancing tension and softness helps me create a more expressive performance.

8.The audition workshop at LCDS was a fantastic opportunity to experience firsthand the school’s teaching style and environment. I was impressed by the emphasis on creativity and individual expression. The workshop allowed me to experiment with new movement languages and approaches to choreography, which was both challenging and inspiring. It reaffirmed my desire to be part of this innovative and supportive community where diverse ideas and artistic practices are celebrated.”
>>> The audition workshop at LCDS was a great chance to experience the school’s teaching style and atmosphere. I was impressed by how much they focus on creativity and personal expression. The workshop let me try new ways of moving and creating choreography, which was both challenging and inspiring. It made me even more excited to be part of this supportive community that celebrates different ideas and art forms.
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