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LCDS interview answer 5,6

작성자: 이*인
2024-11-28 129

회원님의 영작문

5.I am most interested in exploring how movement can communicate complex emotions and ideas. I am particularly drawn to works that challenge traditional forms and conventions, such as those that combine elements of ballet with contemporary techniques. I enjoy investigating different choreographic styles, particularly those that incorporate physicality with emotional and psychological depth, like the works of choreographers such as William l and Ohad Naharin. I am also interested in improvisation and site-specific performances, as I believe these approaches allow for a deeper connection between the dancer and the audience. 6.My long-term goal is to join an international contemporary dance company to refine my performance skills and contribute to innovative works. Ultimately, I plan to return to South Korea, establish my own dance academy, and inspire others through dance. I believe the knowledge and skills I gain at LCDS, including collaboration and professional practices, will help me.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon YOUNG IN!
I was genuinely impressed by your effort in practicing and memorizing. I hope you'd be able to make it on your interview! Don't forget to be confident and keep yourself focused. It's normal to get nervous, so you've got to take a deep breath and be yourself! I tried my best to simplify your answer for some words seem to be difficult.  Keep up the great work!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
5.I am most interested in exploring how movement can communicate complex emotions and ideas. I am particularly drawn to works that challenge traditional forms and conventions, such as those that combine elements of ballet with contemporary techniques. I enjoy investigating different choreographic styles, particularly those that incorporate physicality with emotional and psychological depth, like the works of choreographers such as William l and Ohad Naharin. I am also interested in improvisation and site-specific performances, as I believe these approaches allow for a deeper connection between the dancer and the audience.
>>>I’m interested in how movement can show emotions and ideas. I like works that mix traditional dance, like ballet, with modern styles. I enjoy dance that combines physical movement with emotion, like the work of William Forsythe and Ohad Naharin. I’m also interested in improvisation and performances in unique places, as they help connect dancers and the audience more deeply.

6.My long-term goal is to join an international contemporary dance company to refine my performance skills and contribute to innovative works. Ultimately, I plan to return to South Korea, establish my own dance academy, and inspire others through dance. I believe the knowledge and skills I gain at LCDS, including collaboration and professional practices, will help me.
>>> My long-term goal is to join an international contemporary dance company to improve my skills and be part of creative projects. Later, I want to return to South Korea, start my own dance academy, and inspire others through dance. I believe the knowledge and skills I gain at LCDS, like teamwork and professionalism, will help me reach this goal.
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