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Q: Why do you think people plagiarize?
A: I think the basic reason of plagiarism is the running out of ideas.
If people don't have enough idea for their project or other tasks, they usually plagiarize to finish their work.
Also, I think sometimes the reason might be people's laziness

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Hello, Paul!
Thank you for highlighting two key reasons for plagiarism. I would like to add that external pressures, such as academic or professional expectations, can also drive people to plagiarize, even if they are capable of generating their own ideas.
~ Teacher Trixia

CONTENT:
I think the basic reason of plagiarism is the running out of ideas.
- I think the fundamental reason for plagiarism is a lack of ideas or creative stagnation.
If people don't have enough idea for their project or other tasks, they usually plagiarize to finish their work.
- If people don't have enough ideas for their projects or other tasks, they often resort to plagiarism to complete their work.
Also, I think sometimes the reason might be people's laziness
- Additionally, I think the reason might sometimes be due to people's laziness.

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