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What¡¯s the longest phone call you¡¯ve ever had? What was it about?

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Of course I had phone call with my senior.
She is order than me nine and is my mentor in my life.
when we have phone call to take an hour.
we talk about children,husband, work and behind people's back.

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Hi, Ju Mi! Sometimes, we enjoy talking to someone on the phone so much that we don't notice we've been talking for a long time. ^^ Thank you for always sharing your stories. 
~T. Jewel
Of course I had phone call with my senior.
>>Of course, I had a phone call with my senior.
She is order than me nine and is my mentor in my life.
>>She is older than me by nine years and is my mentor in life.
when we have phone call to take an hour.
>>When we talk on the phone, it usually takes an hour.
we talk about children,husband, work and behind people's back.
>>We talk about our children, husbands, work, and people behind their backs.
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