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My name is 김예린(Kim Ye Lin). When it comes to a Chinese character, it is translated to 金芮隣. 金 is a last name so there is no meaning, it's just a root for my ancestors. 芮 is meaning sprout and 隣 is meaning neighboring, adjoining. To sum up, It means that 'be a beneficial person to surrounding people'. Actually my name could have been 김민서 or 김예서 because my older brother's name is 김진서. In Koera, when I was young, not these days, it was common that parent give a name similar to siblings. Luckily, I love my name; 예린 is much more beautiful.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey Lin! Thank you for sharing the story behind your name. It's so meaningful and beautiful, just like you said! I’m glad you love your name --- it truly suits you!
~T. Jenna

My name is 김예린(Kim Ye Lin). 
>>Correct
When it comes to a Chinese character, it is translated to 金芮隣. 
>>When written in Chinese characters, it is translated as 金芮隣. 
OR
>> In Chinese characters, my name is written as 金芮隣. 
金 is a last name so there is no meaning, it's just a root for my ancestors.
>>金 is a last name, so it has no specific meaning; it is simply the root representing my ancestors.
OR
>>金 is my family name and does not carry a specific meaning; it simply represents my ancestral lineage.
 芮 is meaning sprout and 隣 is meaning neighboring, adjoining. 
>>芮 means "sprout," and 隣 means "neighboring" or "adjoining.
OR
>>芮 signifies "sprout," symbolizing growth and vitality, whereas 隣 denotes "neighboring" or "adjoining," emphasizing proximity and connection.
To sum up, It means that 'be a beneficial person to surrounding people'.
>>To sum up, my name means "to be a beneficial person to those around me."
OR
>>Collectively, my name embodies the notion of being a positive and impactful presence in the lives of those around me.
Actually my name could have been 김민서 or 김예서 because my older brother's name is 김진서. 
Correct, or
>>Interestingly, my name could have ended up as 김민서 or 김예서, following in the footsteps of my older brother, 김진서.
In Koera, when I was young, not these days, it was common that parent give a name similar to siblings. 
>>In Korea, when I was young (though not as much these days), it was common for parents to give siblings names that are similar.
OR
>>In Korea, during my childhood, it was customary --- though less common now --- for parents to choose names for siblings that shared a similar pattern or sound.
Luckily, I love my name; 예린 is much more beautiful.
Correct, or
>>Thankfully, I adore my name; 예린 has a much nicer ring to it.
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