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Do you like phone calls better than in-person conversations? Why or why not?

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It depens on,I lpreper in person conversation better than phone calls.
Because we never know other person's mind and facially expression as phone calls.
Eepecially when we apologize we have to meet in person.

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Hi, Ju Mi!I like in-person conversations better, too, because we can see the other person¡¯s face and feelings. It feels more real. ^^ Thank you for doing homework. Have a fun day! 
~T. Jewel 
It depens on,
>>It depends on the situation.
I lpreper in person conversation better than phone calls.
>>I prefer in-person conversations to phone calls.
Because we never know other person's mind and facially expression as phone calls.
>>Because we can¡¯t see the other person¡¯s expressions or understand their thoughts as well over the phone.
Eepecially when we apologize we have to meet in person.
>>Especially when we apologize, we should meet in person.
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