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Would you rather watch a movie or read a book? Why?

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2024-11-20 391

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I think it will depend on the situation and mood at that time.
But if it a normal situation and feeling, I think I'll read a book.
Because I like quiet places, so I go to the library often and I like books as much as reading is one of my hobbies.
But you can always choose something else.
For example, if a movie I want to watch is released or a movie filmed by a favorite actor is released, I think I will go to see a movie.
In addition, I think I will go to the movies even if I am with my friends or in a good mood.
However, if I am alone or depressed, I think I will go to the library or bookstore and listen to music and read a books.

P.S. I'm worried about my house. I think the company was giving me employee accommodation, but they said there was no empty accommodation available.

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Hello, Yun!~
I agree that our preference depends on our mood and situation but most of the time I prefer watching~ Hehehe...
I appreciate when you included a personal note at the end of your composition. I am positively hoping that one will be available for you before your first day ^___^
Chammy
I think it will depend on the situation and mood at that time.
Or
>> I think my mood and situation could affect my preference.
But if it a normal situation and feeling, I think I'll read a book.
>>But if it is a normal situation and feeling, I think I'll read a book.
OR
>> But opt to read on a typical situation.
Because I like quiet places, so I go to the library often and I like books as much as reading is one of my hobbies.
>> Since I like quiet places, I often go to the library and read books as I love it as one of my hobbies.
But you can always choose something else.
OR
>> But I can have other preferences.
For example, if a movie I want to watch is released or a movie filmed by a favorite actor is released, I think I will go to see a movie.
>> For example, if a movie I want to watch is released or a movie filmed by a favorite actor is released, I think I will go to see the movie.
OR
>> For instance, I believe I will go to see a film if it is released or if it was filmed by a favorite actor.
In addition, I think I will go to the movies even if I am with my friends or in a good mood.
OR
>> Furthermore, I think I will enjoy seeing a movie with my friends in a good mood.
However, if I am alone or depressed, I think I will go to the library or bookstore and listen to music and read a books.
>> However, if I am alone or depressed, I think I will go to the library or bookstore and listen to music and read books.
P.S. I'm worried about my house. I think the company was giving me employee accommodation, but they said there was no empty accommodation available.
>> P.S. I'm worried about my house/accommodation. I think the company would provide me, but they said there was nothing available.
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