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Would you ever give away or sell your collection? Why or why not?

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I think I don't want to give away or sell someone. But My friends or siblings want My collection,
I can give them It's not all one or two.
My collections are made me memories and when I use them I always think "where did I buy? "
"what did I feel?" It was a precious memory.

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Hello, Ju Mi! You're collections are definitely your treasures. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Have a fun day today.
~T. Jewel
I think I don't want to give away or sell someone.
>>I think I don't want to give away or sell anything to anyone.
But My friends or siblings want My collection,
>>But if my friends or siblings want any of my collection, I can give it to them.
It's not all one or two.
>>But not all of it, only one or two items.
My collections are made me memories 
>>My collections hold memories for me.
and when I use them I always think "where did I buy? " "what did I feel?" 
>>When I use them, I always think, 'Where did I buy this?' and 'What did I feel?
It was a precious memory.
>>CORRECT
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>>It was such a precious memory.
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