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Yes, I am. I am looking forward to what will turn out to be about real estate investment that I made with my younger brother. On top of that, I also expecting to go to Japan on trip with my family coming January. In preparation for trip to Japan, I am learning how to speak Japanese, As far as I am concerned, Japanese are not as good at English as we expected, let alone Korean. Also, studying Japanese is worthy of investing my time because Japan is so close to Korea that it doesn¡¯t take me lots of time and money to get there and tour around. With Japanese skills, I can communicate with native people and become a friend to them while touring around. Talking with translation application is not good for me. If possible, I want to talk with them in their language.

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Hello, Mr. Steve! These are all so exciting! I can't wait to see it all come together for you. Thank you for sharing. 
-T. Sonny
Yes, I am. 
>>I certainly am.
I am looking forward to what will turn out to be about real estate investment that I made with my younger brother. 
>>I¡¯m excited to see how the real estate investment I made with my younger brother turns out.
On top of that, I also expecting to go to Japan on trip with my family coming January. 
>>On top of that, I am also anticipating our family's trip to Japan this coming January. 
In preparation for trip to Japan, I am learning how to speak Japanese, 
>>In preparation for our trip to Japan, I am learning how to speak Japanese.
As far as I am concerned, Japanese are not as good at English as we expected, let alone Korean. 
>>As I see it, the Japanese do not have the expected level of English fluency, and their Korean is even more limited.
Also, studying Japanese is worthy of investing my time because Japan is so close to Korea that it doesn¡¯t take me lots of time and money to get there and tour around. 
>>Additionally, I believe studying Japanese is a valuable investment of my time, as Japan is conveniently close to Korea, making it affordable and easy to travel there and explore.
With Japanese skills, I can communicate with native people and become a friend to them while touring around. 
>>With my Japanese skills, I can communicate with native people and socialize with them while touring around. 
Talking with translation application is not good for me. 
>>Speaking through a translation app doesn¡¯t suit me well.
If possible, I want to talk with them in their language.
>>If at all possible, I would like to engage with them in their language.
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