¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Are you excited about anything coming up in the near future?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*°æ
2024-11-18 986

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Yes, I am. I am looking forward to what will turn out to be about real estate investment that I made with my younger brother. On top of that, I also expecting to go to Japan on trip with my family coming January. In preparation for trip to Japan, I am learning how to speak Japanese, As far as I am concerned, Japanese are not as good at English as we expected, let alone Korean. Also, studying Japanese is worthy of investing my time because Japan is so close to Korea that it doesn¡¯t take me lots of time and money to get there and tour around. With Japanese skills, I can communicate with native people and become a friend to them while touring around. Talking with translation application is not good for me. If possible, I want to talk with them in their language.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Mr. Steve! These are all so exciting! I can't wait to see it all come together for you. Thank you for sharing. 
-T. Sonny
Yes, I am. 
>>I certainly am.
I am looking forward to what will turn out to be about real estate investment that I made with my younger brother. 
>>I¡¯m excited to see how the real estate investment I made with my younger brother turns out.
On top of that, I also expecting to go to Japan on trip with my family coming January. 
>>On top of that, I am also anticipating our family's trip to Japan this coming January. 
In preparation for trip to Japan, I am learning how to speak Japanese, 
>>In preparation for our trip to Japan, I am learning how to speak Japanese.
As far as I am concerned, Japanese are not as good at English as we expected, let alone Korean. 
>>As I see it, the Japanese do not have the expected level of English fluency, and their Korean is even more limited.
Also, studying Japanese is worthy of investing my time because Japan is so close to Korea that it doesn¡¯t take me lots of time and money to get there and tour around. 
>>Additionally, I believe studying Japanese is a valuable investment of my time, as Japan is conveniently close to Korea, making it affordable and easy to travel there and explore.
With Japanese skills, I can communicate with native people and become a friend to them while touring around. 
>>With my Japanese skills, I can communicate with native people and socialize with them while touring around. 
Talking with translation application is not good for me. 
>>Speaking through a translation app doesn¡¯t suit me well.
If possible, I want to talk with them in their language.
>>If at all possible, I would like to engage with them in their language.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
138232 washing one\'s face ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1412
138231 Homework À¯*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 3
138230 If you could create a new toy, what would it be and why? Â÷*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1434
138229 What is the best thing about the month of July? Write at least... Â÷*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1261
138228 2024.07.01 ³²*·Ê ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1134
138227 What is your favorite sandwich? What kinds of bread from other... ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1314
138226 Do you usually try free samples at grocery stores? Why or why... ±è*±â ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1659
138225 Q) Can working out make people happy? ÃÖ*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1
138224 homework ½É*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 12
138223 HOMEWORK FOR 07.02.2024 WRITING TASK: What is the most famous... ÀÓ*Áö ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 3
138222 HOMEWORK ÁÖ*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1395
138221 homework ÀÌ*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 2005
138220 The thing that I regret ÇÑ*ÀÚ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 12
138219 What are the best ways to avoid getting sick? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1730
138218 Is mental health more important than physical health? ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1448
138217 Do you think buffet restaurants are worth their price? Why or... ÀÌ*ÅÂ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 2186
138216 HOMEWORK Á¤*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1333
138215 How can weightlifting help with everyday activities and overall... ¹Ú*È£ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1365
138214 What are the consequences of doing homework in a dishonest way? Á¤*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2024-07-02 1511
138213 Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome the... ÀÌ*´Ã ¿Ï·á 2024-07-01 1523

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04