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No I don't think it should be confined to a specific generation. But it doesnt mean it shouldn't be so in a negative way. We must not start to hate a specific country and its nation which is involved in some negative event to our county without any question but only with the past event. But I think more important thing is recognizing what society atmostphere, situation and system have remained so far and knowing right history to prevent the same thing from occuring.

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Hi there Camille! Thank you for finalizing your answer today! You've demonstrated excellent understanding of the key issues and theories. Keep it up!
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No, I don't think it should be confined to a specific generation. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But it doesn't mean it shouldn't be so in a negative way. 
>>> But that doesn't mean it should be seen in a negative point of view. 
We must not start to hate a specific country and its nation which was involved in some negative events to our county without any question but only with the past event. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But I think more important thing is recognizing what society atmostphere, situation and system have remained so far and knowing right history to prevent the same thing from occuring.
>>>But I believe the more important task is recognizing the societal atmosphere, situation, and systems that have persisted, as well as understanding the true history, in order to prevent similar events from happening again.
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