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What does \"don\'t judge a book by its cover\" mean? Do you agree with this idea?

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In my opinion, the proverb above might suggest not to mistake to jump to conclusion by seeing its appearance. I agree with it. Many people including me have made such a mistake in our daily life. So, we keep ourselves from being swayed by something that could lead us wrong way, such as prejudice, deceit that I know everything. But as you might have experienced, it is easier said than done. It takes us a lot of efforts and time to overcome it. On the other hand, we need to be wise enough to accept human¡¯s error to be impressed by the appearances. So it¡¯d be better for us to be more careful about appearance as well as intelligence or skills because we couldn¡¯t get a chance to show how intelligent or skillful we are with a poor outer image.

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Hello, Mr. Steve! I agree that in the real world, it is undeniable that people tend to form judgments quickly and that first impressions matter. 
-T. Sonny
In my opinion, the proverb above might suggest not to mistake to jump to conclusion by seeing its appearance. 
>>In my opinion, the proverb above may be advising us against jumping to conclusions based solely on appearances.
I agree with it. 
>>Correct!
Many people including me have made such a mistake in our daily life. 
>>This is a mistake that many of us, myself as well, have made in our everyday lives.
So, we keep ourselves from being swayed by something that could lead us wrong way, such as prejudice, deceit that I know everything. 
>>Therefore, we avoid being influenced by negative forces such as prejudice or the deception of thinking we know it all.
But as you might have experienced, it is easier said than done. 
>>Correct!
It takes us a lot of efforts and time to overcome it. 
>>It takes us a lot of effort and time to overcome it. 
On the other hand, we need to be wise enough to accept human¡¯s error to be impressed by the appearances. 
>>On the flip side, we need to be wise enough to recognize that humans are prone to making errors based on appearances.
So it¡¯d be better for us to be more careful about appearance as well as intelligence or skills because we couldn¡¯t get a chance to show how intelligent or skillful we are with a poor outer image.
>>For this reason, it¡¯s wise to pay attention to both our appearance and abilities, since a poor outer image might prevent us from showcasing our intelligence or skills.
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