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What are the most important things your parents taught you?

After I had my daugther and son, I realized that the most important thing my parents taught me is how can grow up children.
My parents believed in me and waited for me anytime.
They allowed me to rely on them completely in my whole life.
My parents never forced me to study hard or make choices during my childhood.
When I selected the university and major, they left me to think and do what I wanted.
After enter the university, I didn't study and just played with my new friends.
At that time, my parents also waited for me and just observing and protecting me so that I wouldn't get into any danger.
They gave me a lot of advice, but they didn't force me.
As I was growing up, always my parents was next to me.
It made my attitude, mindset, and personality now.
I totally agree with someone's saying that children are guests who come and go in my life for a while.

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Hello, Nicole!
Thank you for sharing your experience. Your response highlights well how accents develop and how they reflect a person¡¯s background. The point about accents potentially leading to prejudice is a good observation.
~ Trixia

CONTENT:
After I had my daugther and son, I realized that the most important thing my parents taught me is how can grow up children.
- After I had my daughter and son, I realized that the most important thing my parents taught me was how to raise children.
My parents believed in me and waited for me anytime.
- My parents believed in me and were always there for me.
They allowed me to rely on them completely in my whole life.
- They allowed me to rely on them completely throughout my life.
My parents never forced me to study hard or make choices during my childhood.
- My parents never forced me to study hard or make decisions during my childhood.
When I selected the university and major, they left me to think and do what I wanted.
- When I chose my university and major, they let me think for myself and follow what I wanted.
After enter the university, I didn't study and just played with my new friends.
- After entering university, I didn¡¯t study much and spent most of my time hanging out with my new friends.
At that time, my parents also waited for me and just observing and protecting me so that I wouldn't get into any danger.
- Even then, my parents patiently waited for me, observing and protecting me to ensure I wouldn¡¯t get into trouble.
They gave me a lot of advice, but they didn't force me.
- They gave me a lot of advice but never pressured me.
As I was growing up, always my parents was next to me.
- As I grew up, my parents were always by my side.
It made my attitude, mindset, and personality now.
- Their support shaped my attitude, mindset, and personality today.
I totally agree with someone's saying that children are guests who come and go in my life for a while.
- I totally agree with the saying that children are guests who come and go in our lives for a short while.
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